AGNES by Nigel Byng
When she slammed on the brakes to avoid hitting the car in front of her, she knew that the truck behind her was not going to stop as quickly. It’s amazing what you can process in less than two seconds. That’s how long it took for the truck behind her to send her SUV spinning across four lanes of the Interstate, and crashing into the barrier which separated the slum from the city.
Another dizzying four seconds later, she came to a stop on the other side, facing the wrong direction and upside down. She could feel the blood running back up her face, trickling into her eyes, blinding her.
The CEO of her own thriving fashion line, Agnes didn’t believe in God or angels. She counted seven of them running toward her car as the fire erupted. Their voices were panicked, and they rushed in without fear of personal harm. Agnes knew she was badly hurt and in big trouble. She blacked out before they could get to her.
It was Christmas Eve when she had found the last of her angels. They were poor, unemployed and one was homeless. But her people found them all. She invited them, along with their families to a Christmas dinner at a lovely restaurant. Management had done all the work behind the scenes on her behalf.
The six men who kicked and smashed the windows, and with bare hands tore apart her car and extracted her, came with their children and wives; Forty. Then there was the one homeless woman, who had held her fractured arm and talked her through and out of the shadow of death. She came alone. Agnes counted forty-one angels that had saved her life.
She dressed as Santa Clause, and treated all of the children to presents. Squeals of delight filled the room. No one had ever seen Santa cry before. Forty-one strangers, who never knew each other. Six men and one woman, who three months prior had saved the life of a stranger on a busy highway. Their children never had such a treat, and they didn’t care that Santa was in a wheelchair.
When she finally took off her costume, and with much effort, stood up out of her wheelchair, and made the first labored steps after months of therapy, the room went silent. Her therapist walked beside her as she went around to each table and said thank you. Her doctors had said she would never walk again. But Agnes had forty-one reasons why she wanted to prove them wrong.
Author’s Bio
Nigel Byng is a freelance writer, living in the USA. He recently contributed to Happiness in Unexpected Places; an anthology of stories compiled by authors and media professionals from across the globe. His writing can be found on Signs of the Times Australia; MasticadoresIndia, or on his personal blog www.hytsdaily.com where he displays his love of fiction and poetry under his pen name, Jerome Kenrick.
A story that warms the soul! ❤️❤️
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Thank you Alina dearest. Tis the season. 🙏
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Thank you for reading❤️
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Thank you Michelle for publishing my story, my contribution to the Christmas submissions invite. 👏👏💜
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Your story warms our hearts❤️
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This is so heartwarming. You brought me to tears, Nigel!
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Oh dear….don’t want you crying. (I was emotional writing it) thank you Priscilla. 💜🙏
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❤️❤️❤️
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Heartwarming, Nigel – perfect for the holiday season! ❤
~David
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Cheers David. 🙏
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Thank you David❤️
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Tugs my heartstrings. Such a beautiful story, Nigel.
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Thank you Maria darling. 💜🙏
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A beautiful, heartwarming story Nigel. Thank you
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Always lovely to hear from you Sadje. 💜🙏 Thank you my dear.
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Most welcome 🙏🏼
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Thank you Sadje❤️
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You’re most welcome
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A happy Christmas everyone. I hope you all enjoy this heartwarming piece from our resident brilliant story teller, Nigel.
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Thank you Michelle. I’m back on schedule again..I missed my writing
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Beautiful.🥹
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Thank you Melissa. 💜🙏
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🤗🤗🤗
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A different kind of a Christmas story. Very well written, Nigel. 👏 👏 👏
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Cheers Norj. Appreciate you. 💜🙏
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Thank you for reading❤️
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Beautiful, Nigel!
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Thank you Nolcha. 🙏🤗
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What a lovely Christmas story!
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Thank you Dawn. 💜🙏
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Well done, made Joni cry and touched me as well. Angels appear in our lives without us knowing who they are, and reminding us around Christmas is perfect for the season, not to mention that it’s biblical. Cheers my brother! ❤️
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Thank you so much Scott. It’s been a hectic holiday season. So I’m playing catch-up with sleep and reading. I submitted these stories early to get them out of the way. I’m pleased it touched you and the missus. 🙏💜
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Nigel, this sounds very much like a real story! I believe we encounter angels all the time, I know that I have encountered a few of my own. You pulled me in so quickly, I felt like I knew what was coming, and the tears started to flow. Your writing is captivating in so many ways, I wasn’t prepared for the wheelchair. Often the people that we least expect to be there for one another are the very ones who reach out without thinking about themselves. We never really know who our angels are until we really need them, and I’m sure that Agnes will never forget their faces. What an uplifting and optimistic piece, filling those who read it with happiness that people like this still exist in the world. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us, and thanks to Mich for publishing it. ❤️🙏
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Thank you too Joni for taking time to read.💕❤️ Nigel is a gem.
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Thank you so much Joni dearest. I’ve seen so many stories like this play out over the years. And so many people never have the opportunity to say thank you. Heroes exist.. angels do exist. May not be a dramatic rescue, sometimes it may just be purchasing a coffee or sharing your lunch. Moments of kindness, are performed daily, without recognizing their eternal significance. Angels are everywhere.
Thank you for reading, and leaving such a wonderful comment my dear. 🙏💜🤗
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Just so beautiful. Warms me from the inside. All those angel! They’re everywhere.
“Ever this day
be by my side
To light, to guard,
To rule, to guide. Amen”
Merry Christmas. 🎄
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🙏🙏🙏
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